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kutipi2


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Abandoned: A Rose Colored Tragedy (can't think of a better title at the moment...)
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A white rose lays on the gravestone
Releasing its perfume into the wind -
No one smells its scent
Petals gently drooping on the marble -
No one feels its silk
Tattered from the blowing wind -
No one hears its sorrow




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I, personally, love the title and I love the poem.

Guess what you get??

You get a WOW for this one.

Short, crisp, clean and powerful.

Well done, my friend, well done indeed.

~Lady Poe

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Aww...thank you so much... :) I'm glad you liked it.

-- Edited by kutipi2 at 23:35, 2007-10-03

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