Timeless mind draws me Open stars bring me along I look into your eyes and find my path Inside the ground of hope I saw the roots form into my being Water bringing me into my sphere of glass Holy grass! Come forth and pray for my willing Be the one who has my dreams I look to the sky and find the stars to piece you together Little twinkly bridges of lines Formation to go up Jogging to my dark ally I force my brain to forget the past You shall lead me here I just never told you that your words allowed me to hear you I let myself see you Down to the end I'll never forget you Play in the grass of blades to cry my tears Their roots didn't survive my soil Soil drawn from the very mind of spoiled thoughts One who just never got to that world correctly I dream of you spilling yourself before me We have the cup of hope to hold you Tilt it over to never be put back On shelves of foundation I found Hold my home that crumbles before you Rooms with no doors Hallways to lead nowhere However you found your way around Angry blood vessels release themselves I am dead Dead in your hands Just open them and find me motionless in your body Absorbed by our similarities Where did the roots go? The shelves fell down The foundation crumbled I heard your voice and saw your face I heard laughing in the room with your name on it Knocking just drove me out of my timeless mind Your home just fell apart Timeless mind draws me Come follow me to the basement Where our souls shall just be trapped No one will save us Don't scream I want to be stuck with you I want your fear to make me stronger I want you to never leave me Forever will shall seek what we came here for This home shall be our ghost in our timeless minds Darkness grows for us We shall go together Timeless minds draws us forever
hehe nah not what your thinking... this one is totally random... i just wanted to venture through a different field of thoughts :) thank you for reading
I love the imagery and symbolizim you used here. Really quite clever. Caught my attention from beginning to the bittersweet end. :)
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
well for something coming out of nowhere it sure reached alot of places good job, here, really got me reading it through. I love the way you share your thoughts, you throw them on the paper in a way that comes so naturally, and the outtake is something quite captivating fav. parts which have to be quoted: "I force my brain to forget the past You shall lead me here"
"Rooms with no doors Hallways to lead nowhere However you found your way around"
"I am dead Dead in your hands Just open them and find me motionless in your body Absorbed by our similarities Where did the roots go?"
"Come follow me to the basement Where our souls shall just be trapped No one will save us Don't scream I want to be stuck with you I want your fear to make me stronger I want you to never leave me"
really great parts, but the whole thing as ensemble worked its magic great job!
