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Burning Alive


Twisting and Writhing
Burning and Weeping
Tempting you onward
Yet slowly creeping
Upon you in shadow
In madness, In Hell
Look to the darkness
For that's where I dwell

Uncomfortable silence
That nags at your ear
If you deny me passage
I'll slither through your fear
For I am black as midnite
And I reside within a tear
I am your madness
And I will bring you here

To a place where the coldness
Abounds and it constantly grows
Seeping into veins
From fingers and toes
But if you think you have suffered
I'll show you how it really is
To be swallowed by bloody nightmares
And if you think that expanding
Your world is another great cause
I'm here to reveal to you
All your fatal flaws!!

Written by a madman (aka Soulgarden, aka Brad, aka somethingorother)
aka... j/k
hahahaha


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hey not bad for a short time period... liked it much :)

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Wow, great to see you here, my friend. It's been like forever!
And to share one of your classic writes.... Wonderful.

I don't know how you found my site, but I've very glad you did.. It's been so long, and I'm not on TPS (oh maybe I told you I started my own site??? ) much anymore. Great to have you here....

~Lady Poe

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haha... well poe suprisingly he IMed me on myspace and i might have mentioned something hehe ;) lol

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Goodness....this piece definitely brings out the shudders!

"I'll slither through your fear"....love it!

Dreamstress x

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Oooh, my spine is full of cold shivers...wow...very dark, very spooky, very well done! :)

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