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Aftermath


I wrote this a while ago but never posted it anywhere...

Aftermath

Silent now, the country sleeps
Still the tragic willow weeps
Storm winds, unrelenting, blew
Such destruction, sparing few

Awakes our world, a calmer day
Awesome winds have blown away
Appears the sun, the gentle blue
Affirming everything thats new

©Sally Clarke - Can't remember when!



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-- Edited by The Dreamstress at 15:28, 2007-09-29

-- Edited by The Dreamstress at 15:30, 2007-09-29

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Love the rhyming sequence and I love using the willow tree in poetry, very symbolic.
Wonderful write, as usual.
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~Lady Poe

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Thank you, Lady Poe.....your comments are truly appreciated.... I've posted a Willow Tree on Stumble with this poem but I need to reduce it to go on here.

Dreamstress X

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is it a full size willow tree? That would be kind of impressive!


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I second everything that Lady Poe said. :) Very well done.

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