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Early Morning Scribbles


Awoke in the night
Peaceful calm, esculating
Sleeping in your arms.


Forever - a word
overused, not understood
I know the meaning.


See me there beyond
gently swaying palm tree frond
Waving to you, Love.


Mother, Brother, Sis
I must live my life like this
Infinity's bliss.


Dawn smokes horizon
light of day allowing sight
One kiss upon brow.


My love letter is
as simple as possible
I believe in you.



©dragonpoe
9/28/07

-- Edited by Lady Poe at 08:04, 2007-09-28

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Good Evening Lady Poe, hope you are well.
I have trouble with one, and you post a
string of six!!! Nobody likes a show off!

Seriously though, I am not sure how you do
it, but this is beautiful. Drifts from one to the
other exquisitely, easy to read, and never forced.
I am a Fan.


Thank You For Sharing.

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Thank you very much.. Sometimes my mind just won't shut up.....
:)
Your kindness is much appreciated and your opinions valued.

~Lady Poe

-- Edited by Lady Poe at 08:29, 2007-10-05

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I was surprised by the 4th stanza
all where beautifully non-rhyming, and this one suddenly becomes beautifully rhyming... just to return to free verse again.
odd
but you never were normal wink.gif
who would want you to be, anyway? hehe
great piece, lovely write, right there
give us more biggrin.gif

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