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I
I can only say
I love you
And let that be that.

But words are only
air off the tongue
and won't bring you back.

II
Ssshhhhh.
She cries in quiet pain

Hush, baby
Why can't you see I'm dying?

Please, she prayed
God closed his eyes...

Sshhhhhhh.
Nothing left. All alone.

III
Reborn, I stand on the brink
of a life behind me and one beyond
An outstretched hand fingers
tender tendrils of gossamer strings
braiding them, I build a rope.
My bridges can burn, I'll be
alright.


©dragonpoe
9/23/07

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Ohh "my bridges can burn, but I'll be alright."!!! What a way to end the trio of wonderful poems! :) Thanks for sharing this! :)

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Thank you very much!!
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~Lady Poe

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There's a delicate quality to the composition that I like. Particularly care for the first two pieces, which have a spare, minimalist quality I'm keen on. In fact there's something extremely fine about them.

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Thank you, Orpheus... Spare and minimalist is a challenge for me, so I give it a go here and there.

~Lady Poe

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