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But.....


I need to cry
but I haven't tears
I try to live
I'm swallowed by fear

I have so much
to offer and give
but I simply don't
know how to live.

Pulse races every time
I think of you
and I want to cry-
spirit trembles, you on my mind
I think of you
and I want to fly

But I am grounded with my head in the clouds.

There's this ache
I feel inside
I know I need
to be inside your mind

I feel I'm crossing
borders, overstep'd
Tears trickle down
but I have not wept.

I want to say
so many things
but silence holds me
by the wings.

Quiet kills me
and I think I'm dead
I want you but fear
you're out of reach
Enough said....

Because I'm grounded with my head in the clouds.


©dragonpoe
9/23/07


-- Edited by Lady Poe at 20:27, 2007-09-23

-- Edited by Lady Poe at 20:31, 2007-09-23

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mmm mmm mmm very well written... something tells me your grounded :).... now your grounded to the ground but yet your head is in the clouds :) you must be VERY tall LOL hehe sorry poe.... very deep meaning poem poe and you did very well

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Thank you for reading and replying, always appreciate it.
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~Lady Poe

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"But I am grounded with my head in the clouds." Brilliant line! I can definately relate to that. :) The whole poem itself was very VERY well done. :)

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