mmm mmm mmm very well written... something tells me your grounded :).... now your grounded to the ground but yet your head is in the clouds :) you must be VERY tall LOL hehe sorry poe.... very deep meaning poem poe and you did very well
"But I am grounded with my head in the clouds." Brilliant line! I can definately relate to that. :) The whole poem itself was very VERY well done. :)
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W