The dawn bites Ripping me into tender shreds of ribbon like confetti, drawing my mind far and away behind Dirty clouds of darkened pasts and I don't want to face the morning light Until I see a silhoutte of You.
Aww, that's very sweet Poe. :) Very touching, very sentimental. Excellent job. :D
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
Good Evening Lady Poe, a delicious write, blended beautifully into this form. Easy to read and incredibly smooth. To begin with it seemed to be heading dark, then evolved in to something touching and amazingly warm.
