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Evil Faces


Ok.... not quite my best... I didn't have much feeling toward this, but I figured what the heck... see what people say about it :) so feel free to say what you feel about it :)





Evil faces rise from your shadows
My mind will set you free
Just call out my name
I have the Black Cloud calling your name
Fear shall bring you back to my world
Circles of weird shaped patterns litter my mind
Oval just is not quite my style
The eyes wondering if they will see me again
Fear not evil faces... I shall never leave
We called our own tunes, but never played it
Go back before you freeze yourself in my time
My world
My evil face
This is my shadow
The name never heard
They will dissapear
Pointing my way with laugher
Evil faces decend into your shadows

-- Edited by Johnny Boy at 18:07, 2007-09-20

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well, you know me.. I speak my mind... So with that said, here I go.........

weird is spelled wrong smile.gif

This isn't all that bad, I like the feel of an egocentric being speaking... Dark and sinister...very creepy.

Well done.

~Lady Poe

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hehe oops... suppose ill fix that... thank you very much poe :)

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Yes, I second what she says. :) I feel shivers up my spine. :D

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Yes...definite goosebumps...a chilling read.

Dreamstress x

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hehe :) thank you very much for both of your comments... i dont really get into freaky writes that much... i just mainly stick with writes that confuse everyone hehe :)... unless this one confuses you as well as gives you the chills LOL

-- Edited by Johnny Boy at 17:45, 2007-09-21

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