*Ok, so this looks more like a Hershey Kiss than a pyramid, but I'm working on the layout, I figured I'd go ahead and post my very first attempt anyway!*
A Fog Enshrouded Night, blooming Jasmine and fantasy Ricocheting thoughts form Undoing my defenses one by one Surrendering to an escalation of desire and Need, but this I know you know, for youve caused The flush that spreads like lace over my body and youre eyes Have become enraptured with each breath and I am drawn to the sound Of your thinking, as eyes light up and shadows fall gently over and no longer Am I afraid of what the darkness entails. I am safe when I am enveloped by you.
Lovely words, the hershey kiss matches it quite well. hehe. Very touching. I loved the way you played with the senses here. :) Excellent job. :D
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
I've written my poem and I can't get it in the Pyramid shape...it keeps going to the left hand side!!! I've typed it in Word as a pyramid too and cutting and pasting doesn't work! I'm going to bed in a huff!
Dreamstress x
-- Edited by The Dreamstress at 18:10, 2007-10-01
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"Sweet is the dream, divinely sweet, when absent souls in fancy meet."
Edgar Allan Poe
did you figure it out? I just centered mine.. I did mine in Word also, so I could see it shaping as I wrote (but I still didn't get it to stop looking like a damn Hershey Kiss)
I hope you post it, would love to read and see .
~Lady Poe
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"..I don't care for your fairytales... - Sara Bareilles
excellent no doubt this poem has exquisite imagery and if one hears it read, may not have the same charm as being read by oneself. beautiful pictures of a lovers heart, wonderfully "hershey kiss" shaped album
P.S. never heard of hershey kiss before but I found on google and you were right
