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Blood Of A Bitch


Distilled anger infects every pore of my being,
festering pustules of venomous and sludge-thick distain
Nidorous intent dries up saliva - parched choked and so
hard to breathe;
Yet suffocating would be far too kind.

Stagnant with this fuming umbrage,
such memories pool, bitter black and viscous and I'm drowning
in the excrement that you spew like some Adonis downpour-
fluffed by your own reflection.

I see a pale hand that is not mine, reaching up and out for me.
Together, she and I - two victims of your pestilent crimes -
fall silently beneath a reeking surface of sharp and pungent
violence.



dragonpoe
9/17/07

-- Edited by Lady Poe at 15:45, 2007-09-16

-- Edited by Lady Poe at 15:48, 2007-09-16

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Phew! That's a jolly good write, DragonLady of Poe.....I only wish I hadn't just had my dinner!!!

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ahah sorry about that!

I found an error, though and had to fix it!!

Glad you liked.

~Lady Poe

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Well it couldn't have been a big one because I missed it!!!! Yes I liked!!!

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it wasn't... had "drives" instead of "dries" easy fix!

Again, thank you.

~Lady Poe

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name grabbed me.... then poem grabbed me even more.... DAMN that is a great poem :)

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hahah Thank you very much!

~Lady Poe

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