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The Dreamstress


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Wide-Eyed and Sleepless

Heart beats wildly
Resonating
Pulses racing
In the night

Eyes wide open
Filled with terror
Vivid nightmares
Soul takes flight

Tossing, turning
Hands are clenching
Long for morning's
Welcome light

©Sally Clarke 19/01/07





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Lady Poe


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Ahhhh, something I know well.
Great pace to this, Dreamstress.. you get the heart pumping and the mind wobbling.
Bravo.
~Lady Poe

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The Dreamstress


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Thank you, Lady Poe....sometimes when I read it, it seems a bit sort of, cut off....but then other times, it's just right.

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i agree with poe :) plus the imagry was written out very well too :) great job

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Thank you kindly!

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