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Lady Poe


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A flicker, a flash
sudden crash

All my world comes tumbling down -

F*ck you, I hate you
and all that grief
You're a liar, a schemer
a goddamn thief.

A tremble, a shiver
lips broken, quiver

Taste it and take it
hold it and hate it
This isn't you, it isn't me
Hell's demons shoot with accuracy.

A flicker, a flash
sudden crash

All my world comes tumbling down.

©dragonpoe
9/12/07

-- Edited by Lady Poe at 20:12, 2007-09-12

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kutipi2


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Very intense! The repeated line also give a nice feel to the poem. Oh...goosebumps! :)

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thank you, I love giving you goosebumps! hahahaha
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~Lady Poe

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I enjoy getting them. :D haha

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