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Broken Porcelain


"Momma," she cried, crimson staining ivory skin
The stars in the heavens collided
"Look what I've done." As she offered her hands

And Momma just stood there
reminiscent of years gone by when
everything in heaven collided
she had cried until the blood had dried.

"Baby," said Momma, "Tighten your grip."
No light upon the distant shoreline
As the vast void spilled right then
with her back to the world
and her face to the wind, she carried on.

"It's nothing that can't be undone," Momma said
"Without a bit of grit and grime. Now stop all
your fussing, you did no crime."

"But Momma," she cried
"It's not his blood, but mine."

©dragonpoe
9/6/07

-- Edited by Lady Poe at 18:39, 2007-09-06

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Oooh, I loved the twist at the end. Very nice! Darkness has arrived, and her name is Poe. lol
Much enjoyed my friend. Much enjoyed. :)

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hehe, it's been awhile since I dipped my quill in the pitch ink!
Time to flex my claws and rip things apart some more!!
Thank you for reading and enjoying.
~Lady Poe

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Not a problem at all. :)

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great poem... and i agree nice twist :)... take those talons of yours and RIP more :)

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haha, thank you johnny.

~Lady Poe

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Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrr......Goosebumps!!!



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Thank you!
That's music to my ears.
~Lady Poe

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