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kutipi2


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Ocean (haiku)
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Inhale, exhale - breathe -
in, out - quiet pulses sigh -
breathe - out - ecstasy -


-- Edited by kutipi2 at 02:11, 2007-09-02

-- Edited by kutipi2 at 02:11, 2007-09-02

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*Clapping enthusiatically*
Damn girl! Beautiful. Love it.
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Kudos to you, my dear. Kudos.
~Lady Poe

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kutipi2


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I try, I try. lol

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Beautiful rhythm
Thought I could hear the Ocean
Wonderful Haiku






-- Edited by slimboydim at 15:36, 2007-09-02

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Slim = show off wink.gif

ok that winkie does not look like a wink, so as to end any possible confusion...
wink wink!!

haha!


-- Edited by Lady Poe at 17:18, 2007-09-02

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Hahaha!!!! Slim, thank you for your wonderful comment! :)

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very nice kutie... i liked it very much :)

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Thank you Johnny! I am glad you liked it. :)

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I found myself following the "instructions" hehe! ..well done, good one.

Dreamstress x

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Hehehe, well thank you. Glad you liked it. :)

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