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Flowing Rivers


Flow river flow
Show me your ocean
Come tides to wash my evil ways downstream
Wet stream thoughts of my mind
Soak to my ground
I only burden my troubles
Always see yours in a puddle
Created by your own guilt and doubt
Came with open arms and left with closed minds
The dam saw your fate go away
Over flowing water washes away your goodness
It is your river that shall dry up

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Good writing. A wonderful way to get those feelings out.
I like the ending. Sharp, abrupt. Says alot.
Kudos.
~Lady Poe

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why thank you very much poe... :)

-- Edited by Johnny Boy at 20:12, 2007-08-27

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