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Lady Poe


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Cut throat, darling
and all of this sh!t
travels right down
to the bottomless pit -

That use to be what loved you.

Caught a glimpse
of the evil inside
You played the game
virtue and pride -

And stumbled a little on the trip.

Bastard and vagrant
run little boy, run
I'll catch you soon enough
when the moon outraces
the sun -

And then you'll know divinity.

Whoever said love
is a man's chosen game
didn't know that a woman
can play just the same -

Now look who's crying.

©dragonpoe
8/25/07

-- Edited by Lady Poe at 18:55, 2007-08-25

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kutipi2


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Excellent job! The last line stanza was great, and so true!

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Lady Poe


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Thank you , my dear.
You know me, have to balance out the happy happy with a bit of tarnish! hahahahaaa

Thank you, again for reading, and might I add..
Where is your latest?!?!?!?
C'mon, you need to post something
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~Lady Poe

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Don't rush me now. :)

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Greetings.
I see you have not fixed the censorship issue. It's only a small glitch.
The poem itself is one of your usuals, if I can call it that. I'm surprised there is no picture to accompany this.

I like it.

-- Edited by Athena at 17:57, 2007-08-26

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interesting write there poe :) my friend love the one line in there hehe :) not saying which


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