Epyllion

Past
seconds
ticking slow
and time takes a
breath before going
back to the beginning
of the adventures at hand
where your lips began brushing soft
across the never-again spot of
past second love affairs gone total black.

~dragonpoe
2/11/08

Oooh, very good! A very interesting read. :) Great job.

Thank you very much.

I love your signature line, btw :)

~Poe

Ahh yes. :) I love that whole narration, but it didn't all fit!

-- Edited by kutipi2 at 00:10, 2008-02-15