Epyllion

One by one, snip snip
Fates thread is cut as I sit
In the darkest place
Conquered in my mind,
Conceived by devils,
Harbored by many angels,
Limbo for eternity

a little bit of darkness this evening?

Very nice, indeed!

~Lady Poe

Couldn't have done it without you Poe. Kudos to you for your help. :)

-- Edited by kutipi2 at 12:25, 2008-04-19

"could have"
*ahem*
I honestly find it ridiculous
not this poem itself but all of these forms you come up with
I find no base to their variation! I can add a syllable and make up my own form after my own name

sorry if I offend anyone, it's really not my intention
I respect you all, but I find these "Choka" and "Senyru" (at least those with very small difference between them) to be simple whims.

on the other hand, this poem is beautiful
teh beginning is so creative
and such a sudden appearance of "angels" in the text
as well as "limbo" was
it's quite refreshing, though, very nice read

Thank you Alexe. I appreciate your comment. :)