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Lady Poe



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Date: Oct 19, 2007
His Light


*my very first EVER Pantoum, written straight off the cuff..... I like this style~*


His Light:

I'll fill the heavens with his light
Where all else fades into peace
I succumb to the silence of the night
And find my souls soft release.

Where all else fades into peace
I know not where my heart will land
And find my souls soft release
In the contours of his hand.

I know not where my heart will land
And this begins to shape me so
In the contours of his hand
I find he holds my very soul.

And this begins to shape me so
As minutes crawl straight into years
I find he holds my very soul
While conquering all my earthly fears.

As minutes crawl straight into years
I succumb to the silence of the night
No pain no shame nor sorrowed tears
I'll fill the heavens with his light.


©dragonpoe
10/19/07


-- Edited by Lady Poe at 21:13, 2007-10-19

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kutipi2



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Date: Oct 19, 2007

Excellent! I am so proud of you. The flow was perfect, and the wording was great, and the images were well done. Lovely first (which I can't believe smile.gif ) !

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Lady Poe



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Date: Oct 19, 2007

Thank you. For your kind words and for you teaching me this lovely style.
I simply followed your example, so you that means yours is equally as excellent and lovely :)

~Lady Poe

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kutipi2



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Date: Oct 19, 2007

You flatter me so, Lady Poe...I was a POEt and I didn't even know it. :D

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Lady Poe



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Date: Oct 19, 2007

hahahahaaaa

Good one!
Made me laugh.
smile.gif

~Lady Poe

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kutipi2



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Date: Oct 19, 2007

I thought it would. :)

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