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The Dreamstress
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Date: Oct 6, 2007
| Amazing what a glass of Baileys can do!!! :o) |
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| There was a "young" lady called Sally
Who was ever so slightly doolally
She decided to pick
A slick limerick
For the Chopping Block, eventu-ally
!!!!Amended....thank you, Alexe!! Dreamstress x Sorry.....just didn't like to see an empty thread!!  Dreamstress x -- Edited by The Dreamstress at 16:44, 2007-10-06 __________________
"Sweet is the dream, divinely sweet, when absent souls in fancy meet."
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ALEXE
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Date: Oct 6, 2007
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well it's not a limerick :D I thought limericks have only 5 lines
not much to chop, either, it's pretty loose already
but great post, thanks for not leaving the thread deserted
keep at it
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The Dreamstress
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Date: Oct 6, 2007
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Oooooooo hang on....I'll stick the final line up a bit!!!
Dreamstress X
P.S. Thank you for looking and commenting!!
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Lady Poe
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Date: Oct 6, 2007
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| Ahahahhahaaaaaaaa leave it to you, m'dear to set the pace on this one! That was great! Love it. Since Alexe was kind enough to offer a crit, I'm just going to heap on the praise because *sings* It's my forum and I can do what I want to, do what I want to........  ~Lady Poe
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The Dreamstress
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Date: Oct 7, 2007
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Hehe! Thank you both!
Well....let's see some action!!
Dreamstress x
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kutipi2
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Date: Oct 7, 2007
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Hahaha, Poe, you crack me up! :D Sally, your poem cracked up up as well. Hahaha, lay on the laughs all! :)
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slimboydim
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Date: Oct 13, 2007
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Good Morning Sally, hope all is well.
"Ever so slightly" doolally, may not be entirely
true! Apart from that, no crit from me.
Certainly a warm way to start the Criticism
thread!
Thank You For Sharing.
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The Dreamstress
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Date: Oct 13, 2007
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Good afternoon Slim...all is well thank you....and I trust with you. Ok, ok...I agree..."ever so slightly doolally" might not quite hit the nail on the head but I'm allowed a little poetic licence, aren't I (wink!)
I'm glad everyone enjoyed my little Lumerick (don't ask - hehe!!)
There may be more a-coming!!
Dreamstress X
-- Edited by The Dreamstress at 12:24, 2007-10-13
-- Edited by The Dreamstress at 13:00, 2007-10-13
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